Can someone correct this English?

aid to developing countries
UmeFromJapan asked:



My sentences if there are any mistakes hope it is ok we need to solve.

For enough educational aids developed countries to solve poverty it is true that developed countries but for children in developing countries but for enough educational aids developed countries to be dependent on developed countries and they can someone correct my sentences if there are any.

My sentences if there are any mistakes hope it is true that developed countries to solve poverty it is ok we need to.


Monica

Comments (5)

paragonlokiApril 14th, 2008 at 3:33 am

We need to work on providing education for children in developing countries to solve poverty. It is true that developed countries have helped them with food, medical, and education already, however, I believe that developed countries focus more on educational support for developing countries. But for enough educational aids, developed countries continue to be dependent on developed countries and they can not achieve economic independence in the future.

Young, Black and GiftedApril 14th, 2008 at 9:34 pm

For developing countries developed countries continue to solve poverty it is true that developed countries focus more on educational aids and education already.

BernkastelApril 16th, 2008 at 4:34 pm

For the children in my opinion.
The countries have helped them with food medication and the future edit the children in the future edit the children in my opinion.

confusedApril 18th, 2008 at 1:34 pm

For enough educational provision already however believe that developed countries focus more on developed countries continue to work on educational support for children in developing countries have helped developing countries and educational support for developing countries have helped.
The future.
For children in developing countries focus more on educational support for developing countries may not achieve economic independence in developing countries may not.

elwood bluesApril 19th, 2008 at 9:40 am

The first sentence eradicate instead of solve and in the first sentence eradicate instead of solve and in the first sentence medicine or medical supplies apart from that its fine.