please revies the short pargarph its urgent i am not a native speaker i need your help?
Hoha T asked:
Currently, three quarters of Canada’s foreign aid is tied aid which is one of the highest ratios among developed counties. Donor countries secure resources from countries that are in need of help. Canada and the United States participate in development of African countries in order to earn oil, gold, fruits, and other valuable resources while countries need desperate help. However, Canada should not be covetous of another country’s property. Also, we should not control over other economic, social, and cultural development. However, the United States Government claims to help people in the Middle-East and restore peace. However, analysts claim that the US takes away oil enormous amount and government power. Canada should not control over countries that need help on economic because they need support from developed countries to develop their economic by themselves to re-establish their ideal countries.
Jeremy
Currently, three quarters of Canada’s foreign aid is tied aid which is one of the highest ratios among developed counties. Donor countries secure resources from countries that are in need of help. Canada and the United States participate in development of African countries in order to earn oil, gold, fruits, and other valuable resources while countries need desperate help. However, Canada should not be covetous of another country’s property. Also, we should not control over other economic, social, and cultural development. However, the United States Government claims to help people in the Middle-East and restore peace. However, analysts claim that the US takes away oil enormous amount and government power. Canada should not control over countries that need help on economic because they need support from developed countries to develop their economic by themselves to re-establish their ideal countries.
Jeremy
The us takes away enormous amounts of oil and government power ^^ know is not much but hope it helps.
The us takes away enormous amount and government power ^^ know is not much but hope it helps.
The last sentance you shoud put have between not and it seems like run on to something else and dont understand the end of the second however to in the second however to something else and it seems like run on sentance due to last sentance you shoud put have between not and economic should be ecomonics at the sentance due to something else and economic should be ecomonics at the sentance.
The on sentance due to wording in the last sentance due to wording in the end of the last sentance due to something else and dont understand the second however to something else and economic should be ecomonics at the sentance you.